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"Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter."

 

LETTER WRITING TIPS  

 

Begin your letter by briefly explaining who you are and where you are writing from.

 

Be polite and take a firm position in your letter. Be confident in your understanding of the issue and remember that the legislator may know less than you.

 

Be brief - respect the fact that the official is very busy. Limit your letter to one page and one issue. 

 

Include a brief summary of the crime or issue youÕre writing about, and make sure your information is factually correct.  Carefully read the entire case and the case updates so that you can be sure that the information youÕre quoting is the most current.  Referring to inaccurate or outdated information will discredit your letter and you will not be taken seriously.

 

Choose the three strongest points to support your argument and develop them clearly. Too much information can distract from your position.

 

Make it personal. Tell your officials why the issue matters to you and how it affects you, your family, and your community. Make a connection to the legislator. Did you vote for her? Did you contribute to the campaign?

 

Be specific - tell the recipient exactly what youÕd like to see happen.  ÒPlease make sure this man cannot ever hurt another animalÓ is less compelling and useful than something like ÒPlease ensure that this man is sentenced to the maximum term of jail time allowable by law, required to undergo mandatory psychological counseling and banned from owning animals for as long as possible.Ó

 

If you live in the area where the case is being prosecuted, let the official know that the issue is very important to you and that the way they deal with the situation may affect your future voting decisions. 

 

If you live in a different area from where the case is being prosecuted, let them know that his or her position on the issue may make you reluctant to visit the county, state or province and that you may be inclined to spend your money elsewhere.

 

Proof-read and spellcheck your letter - typos and grammatical errors will reduce your credibility and you may be taken less seriously.

 

DO NOT WRITE IN ALL CAPS.  Use your words to convey how strongly you feel.  Letters written in all caps are harder to read and often imply ÒshoutingÓ. 

 

Include your real name and mailing address. A random selection of names may be contacted to verify signatures. (Hence, if names/addresses cannot be contacted, they will only hurt our cause.)

 

Letters without full names or mailing addresses could be taken less seriously, as it could be construed that you are attempting to hide behind anonymity.  When people are willing to be held accountable for their opinions, those opinions typically have more weight.

 

Use the proper title and salutation in your letter, and always address your letter to a specific person.  If youÕre using the Pet-Abuse.Com Action Alert forms, will automatically fill in the title and salutation for you.  

 

PROPER SALUTATIONS

 

Prosecuting Attorney/Judge:

The Honorable John/Jane Doe

 

Presidents:

Dear Mr./Ms. President Doe

 

Mailing address to Members of Congress:

The Honorable John/Jane Doe

 

Greeting to Member, Senate:

Dear Senator Doe

 

Greeting to Member, House of Representatives:

Dear Congressman/woman Doe

 

Mailing Address to Ambassadors:

His/Her Excellency John/Jane Doe

 

Greeting to Ambassador:

Dear Ambassador Doe

 

Prime Ministers:

Dear Prime Minister Doe

 

Other Officials and elected representatives:

Dear (Title) Doe

 

Writing to newspapers, TV or radio stations:

Dear (Title) John/Jane Doe

Dear Mr./Ms. John/Jane Doe

 

When a prosecutor or judge comes through with a meaningful sentence, be sure to write to them and thank them for their efforts.

 

LETTER, FAX, PHONE, OR EMAIL?

 

A typed or handwritten letter carries the most weight with any recipient. You can copy (and paste into your word-processing program) any pre-written message, and customize it. U.S. mail addresses for elected officials can be found on our Get Connected page.

 

Most of Take Action messages should be sent via fax. However, for certain issues or in cases where you cannot find a fax number for the intended recipient of a message, send your message by email instead.

 

A telephone call shows that you care enough to spend a little money, and if you can actually speak with the recipient, phone conversations offer unparalleled opportunity for feedback.

 

Emails require less commitment from the sender. Recipients, of course, have this in mind when they read emails. However, the convenience - not to mention the potential to mobilize hundreds or even thousands of messages - makes email an indispensable tool in the activist's arsenal.

 

RAISE HELL AT PUBLIC HEARINGS AND COMMUNITY MEETINGS

 

Public hearings provide an opportunity for public comments on a particular project or vote. This kind of community involvement can make a strong statement.

 

Some tips:

 

    * Time is limited at public hearings, so arrive early to sign up for a slot to speak.

    * When you speak, focus on your main points. You will often be able to submit written statements which will allow you to address additional concerns.

    * Be polite and respect other community members' ideas. A hearing is a forum for the exchange of ideas, not a neighborhood contest.

 

NOW'S YOUR CHANCE: MEETING WITH ELECTED OFFICIALS

 

Meeting with elected officials in person is an opportunity to make personal contact with decision-makers and convey your position in a persuasive and animated manner. A lobby visit allows you to tell your Senator or Representative what you think about a certain issue or bill and ask her/him to take positive action.

 

Here are some suggestions for a successful lobby visit:

 

Before the Meeting

 

    * Request a meeting in writing with specific times and dates. Follow up with a call to the scheduler or secretary to confim the meeting.

    * Make sure to convey what issue or bill you would like to discuss.

    * Decide on talking points to express your most important ideas.

    * Set a goal for the meeting. Do you want the Representative to vote for or against a bill or introduce legislation?

 

During the Meeting

 

    * Be prompt.

    * Keep it short and stick to your talking points.

    * Take the time to thank the elected official for past votes in support of your issues.

    * Provide personal and local examples of the impact of the legislation.

    * Be honest and don't claim to know more than you do about an issue. You don't have to be the expert, just a committed and active constituent.

    * Set a deadline or timeline for response.

 

After the Meeting

 

    * Write a thank you letter to the legislator.

    * Send any materials and information you offered.

    * Follow up on deadlines and if they are not met, set up others. Be persistent.

 

GET CONNECTED

 

Phone:

Your Senator and Representative can be called via the U.S. Capitol Switchboard at 202-224-3121.

 

Write:

Your Senator at U.S. Senate, Washington, DC 20510.

 

Your Representative at U.S. House of Representatives, Washington, DC 20515.

Look up your Senator or Representative online. Look up all your representatives online, including your local ones such as city council officials, governors, etc.

 

Contact the President:


 

The White House

1600 Pennsylvania Avenue

N.W.
Washington, DC 20500

Comment line: 202-456-1111

Fax: 202-456-2461